I cant understand why you cant love me like before
as without you , I don’t know what life has in store.
Each morning, as the sun rises, to face the day, I dread
as from your memories, I am unable to move ahead.
I cant understand why you cant love me like before
as without you, leading life has become such a bore.
For me, you were always like a fragrance
which I miss since I no longer have your presence.
I cant understand why you cant love me like before
as like lovers of the past, we could’ve been part of folklore.
Despite the odds, we could have somehow stayed together
even if it meant that fate tried to take us away far and farther.
I cant understand why you cant love me like before
as daily all I do, is to knock on almighty’s door.
I wont mind going on to sacrifice, of mine, this life
so that I can take re-birth and make you my wife.
52 comments:
its good...but ..could be better... [:)] the second stanza second line last word 'bore' doesnt suit re.. :( !! :)!!
Youve penned gems...this one...can be treated better
the writing is a bit stilted...but the emotions behind the lines are superb!
you are harboring some very strong feelings for a certain lady my friend?
love is very addictive!
Cheers mate.
PS- thanks for all the comments on my blog..took me sometime to figure out you were the bard who dsnt have to try too hard..lol
Well A nice poem...
KEEP WRITING
:)
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感謝分享哦~會再來看看的~............................................................
After a storm comes a calm...................................................
the food is delicious!............................................................
我們唯一需要恐懼的事，是恐懼本身 ..................................................
Many a little makes a mickle...................................................................
Many a little makes a mickle...................................................................
支持你!!!期待你的更新!!!相信一定會更好!!!!.................................................................
Pay somebody back in his own coin.................................................................
良言一句三冬暖，惡語傷人六月寒。.................................................................
It takes all kinds to make a world.............................................................
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At a point a person does leave us. All good things do come to an end :)
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